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This is actually a drabble, yay!

[livejournal.com profile] shirebound requested starlight on snow.



Tauriel often journeyed beyond her borders to clearings where sun warmed her cheeks or to where flakes of ice lace floated from the sky and landed on her brow like sea mist.

One December night, Tauriel arrived at her favorite clearing. She darted over freshly fallen snow, her feet barely making an imprint, and leaped upon a boulder. There she sat, knees drawn to her chest. The snow twinkled ethereal silver.

Starlight.

Tears rolled down her cheeks.

On nights like this, she always thought of him, the dwarf with the gentle eyes who had carried her heart to the end.

Date: 2014-02-05 10:01 pm (UTC)
dreamflower: gandalf at bag end (Default)
From: [personal profile] dreamflower
Oh, that's so sad and beautiful. Poor Tauriel.

Date: 2014-02-06 12:05 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
Thank you! :))

Date: 2014-02-05 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com
How lovely. *sniffs*

Date: 2014-02-06 12:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
Yeah, I don't think I meant for it to go sad, but that's what the story did, silly story! Thank yoU! :)

Date: 2014-02-05 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] browngirl.livejournal.com
AWWWW TAURIEL. This is gorgeous!

Date: 2014-02-06 12:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
hee! Thank you, my dear!!!

Date: 2014-02-06 12:27 am (UTC)
shirebound: (Autumn - Annwyn55)
From: [personal profile] shirebound
Ohhhhhh. That final line actually gave me chills. It's so perfect, and I can imagine every moment of this scene and these emotions.

Thank you!

Date: 2014-02-06 12:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
wow, thank you!! :)

Date: 2014-02-06 12:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
Oh, my, this is heartwrenching. You write her beautifully.

Date: 2014-02-06 12:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
oh, thank you so much! Once I started writing her, I felt I slipped into it easily...surprisingly!

Date: 2014-02-06 12:56 am (UTC)
danae_b: (merry and pippin)
From: [personal profile] danae_b
Ohhhh. That was lovely, and sad. Poor Tauriel.

Date: 2014-02-06 12:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
aww..Thank you!

Date: 2014-02-06 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com
That's a very pretty pic that you painted with your words there. Sad, but pretty.

Date: 2014-02-06 12:07 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! *hugs*

Date: 2014-02-06 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Oh - that is lovely. Poignant, and beautiful.

Date: 2014-02-07 03:00 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :)

Date: 2014-02-06 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com
Aw, so poignant and bittersweet! Poor star-crossed lovers.

Date: 2014-02-07 03:01 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
Thank you! Yes, so very star-crossed!

Date: 2014-02-06 10:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aliensouldream.livejournal.com
Oh! That's a sad thought. But a beautiful moment.

Date: 2014-02-07 03:03 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
aww..Thank you! I don't know why I keep doing sad stuff! I swear I don't mean to!

Date: 2014-02-13 05:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dodger-sister.livejournal.com
Oh my goodness, this was heartbreaking and beautiful. Just lovely.
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