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claudia603 ([personal profile] claudia603) wrote2014-02-05 03:41 pm

Drabble #4 for Shirebound

This is actually a drabble, yay!

[livejournal.com profile] shirebound requested starlight on snow.



Tauriel often journeyed beyond her borders to clearings where sun warmed her cheeks or to where flakes of ice lace floated from the sky and landed on her brow like sea mist.

One December night, Tauriel arrived at her favorite clearing. She darted over freshly fallen snow, her feet barely making an imprint, and leaped upon a boulder. There she sat, knees drawn to her chest. The snow twinkled ethereal silver.

Starlight.

Tears rolled down her cheeks.

On nights like this, she always thought of him, the dwarf with the gentle eyes who had carried her heart to the end.
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[personal profile] dreamflower 2014-02-05 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's so sad and beautiful. Poor Tauriel.
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 12:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :))

[identity profile] addie71.livejournal.com 2014-02-05 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
How lovely. *sniffs*
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I don't think I meant for it to go sad, but that's what the story did, silly story! Thank yoU! :)

[identity profile] browngirl.livejournal.com 2014-02-05 11:26 pm (UTC)(link)
AWWWW TAURIEL. This is gorgeous!
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
hee! Thank you, my dear!!!
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[personal profile] shirebound 2014-02-06 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
Ohhhhhh. That final line actually gave me chills. It's so perfect, and I can imagine every moment of this scene and these emotions.

Thank you!
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
wow, thank you!! :)

[identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, my, this is heartwrenching. You write her beautifully.
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, thank you so much! Once I started writing her, I felt I slipped into it easily...surprisingly!
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[personal profile] danae_b 2014-02-06 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
Ohhhh. That was lovely, and sad. Poor Tauriel.
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 12:07 pm (UTC)(link)
aww..Thank you!

[identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 07:33 am (UTC)(link)
That's a very pretty pic that you painted with your words there. Sad, but pretty.
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 12:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! *hugs*

[identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh - that is lovely. Poignant, and beautiful.
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2014-02-07 03:00 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! :)

[identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, so poignant and bittersweet! Poor star-crossed lovers.
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2014-02-07 03:01 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Yes, so very star-crossed!

[identity profile] aliensouldream.livejournal.com 2014-02-06 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! That's a sad thought. But a beautiful moment.
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[identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com 2014-02-07 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
aww..Thank you! I don't know why I keep doing sad stuff! I swear I don't mean to!

[identity profile] dodger-sister.livejournal.com 2014-02-13 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my goodness, this was heartbreaking and beautiful. Just lovely.